Excerpt:
Stephen woke from the dreamless
sleep groggy. Since the Frenchmen took him from the field, he’d lost all sense
of time. Bits and pieces of events faded
in and out of memory. He recalled at one point he’d tried to fight and they’d
stuck him with a small spiked weapon. It hadn’t hurt, no more than a prick from
a lady’s sewing needle. Then, he was floating and had the sense of angels
lifting him.
Not angels but his captors.
The delicious scent brought him
awake. He might’ve slept hours or days, he didn’t know. All he knew was the
food smelled like fine fare and his stomach felt stuck to his backbone, he was
so hungry. Those last weeks before the battle the army had run short of
provisions. The knights had foraged for food along with their horses. The night
before the battle he’d dined on overripe berries and dandelion soup. Soup
indeed. Nothing but a handful of
dandelion greens thrown into a kettle of boiling water.
“Is the food for me?” he’d asked,
stomach rumbling.
A new man, one whose voice he’d
never heard answered, “Yes.”
He attempted to rise but tethers
kept him prone. His wrists and ankles were tied to the bed with padded cuffs
instead of chains. A small but curious kindness.
“How am I to eat it tethered as I
am? Smell alone will not get it to my stomach.”
“I’ll release you, but first you
must promise not to fight or to touch your eye wrap.”
“Yes, yes, I promise.” He’d agree
to most anything for a full belly.
Stephen sat up as soon as he was
free.
The man put the tray of food on his
lap and set cloth wrapped utensils into his palm.
“What is this?” Stephen poked the
tined edge of a four-pronged eating tool to his fingertip.
“What is it? It’s a fork. You
know—for sticking your food with and bringing pieces to your mouth.”
Seems silly. Why bother with cutting
then sticking your food with the fork before bringing it to your mouth, an
eating dagger is faster, more sensible? Stab and eat.
The aroma of meat and bread filled
his nose and he put the fork aside. His head low to the tray, he shoveled the
vegetables into his mouth with the spoon. A juicy, plump chicken breast nestled
next to the vegetables. He tore the meat from the bone with his fingers,
licking the buttery drippings from the tips as he devoured it. He last ate
chicken in July and then it wasn’t a fat hen but a wiry, tough rooster. When
the spoon no longer scooped vegetables, he used his bread to wipe up any
remaining morsels on the plate. The captors brought two more plates and he
finished those before he was finally full.
Stephen sensed someone enter the
room as the man left with the last tray.
“Who is there?”
“I’m here to give you a sponge
bath, if you like,” a female, young by the sound of her said.
“You wish to bathe me?”
The pass of his hand over his hair
told him somebody had washed it. No dried blood was caked anywhere. He sniffed
his forearms. They smelled of soap and had also been cleaned. He had no need of
a bath. The woman offered something other than a wash.
He smiled with knowledge. It had
been a long time since he’d enjoyed the services of a bawd. Tempting as the
harlot’s offer was, he suspected enemy devilry and declined.
“Would you like to listen to
music?” she asked.
The bawd traveled with minstrels.
He wasn’t in the mood for her other services, but he’d welcome a cheerful tune.
“I would.”
“What station do you wish,” she
asked.
“I don’t understand.”
“I’ll turn it to a classical one.”
A tune different from any he ever
heard came from across the room. “I’ll come back tomorrow,” the bawd said. Her
light footfalls told him she left.
Classical station? Lovelier than any minstrel’s music, he
dozed off still baffled by weird words and goings on of his captors. They’d
woken him an unknown amount of time later and said it was the day and hour for
his eye surgery. A man told him to make a fist. He said perfect when he found a
vein and then stuck a needle into the crook of Stephen’s elbow. That was the
last he remembered.
“Monsieur, monsieur,” a female
voice said, patting his hand. “Wake up.”
Stephen yawned and propped himself
up on an elbow. “Ugh.” His mouth tasted like sour milk and his tongue felt like
it was wrapped in a mitten. “I’d like some water.”
“Here.” The woman slid a flexible
spout between his lips. “Suck.”
He didn’t know what the spout was
made of, nor did he care. The water tasted sweet to his parched mouth and he
sucked the cup dry. “More.” When he’d sucked another cup dry, he asked. “What
day is this?”
“September 22,” the woman said,
taking the empty cup.
Three days had passed since the
battle. Why had they let him live? There could be no good reason for it.
“This is Dr. Berger. Do you
remember me speaking to you two days ago about your eye surgery?”
“Yes.”
“Dr. Monette is here too. We want
to talk to you about the day they found you. The more we know about you, the
more we can help.”
“Who is the woman?” She didn’t
sound like the first woman, the one who smelled like a garden. This one carried
no scent of any flower. Nor did she sound young as the bawd. What was this
one’s purpose? The first, he suspected, had created the potion that put him to
sleep. He knew a bawd’s.
“She is Nurse Cloutier.”
Probably Witch Cloutier. “Ask what
you will.”
“What is your name?”
“Stephen Palmer.”
“What’s the last thing you remember
before receiving your injury?”
“I am a knight in service to the
Baron Guiscard. He rode to the aid of his friend. I saw your men surround the
baron. They were trying to pull him from his mount. I was about to ride to his
aid when one of your knights, his heraldic symbol was of a panther on a field
of orange, challenged me.” Stephen thought again how Guy’s warning had made him
falter. “I...I hesitated and your man struck with his sword.”
“Monsieur Palmer, your eye injury
is serious. If this answer is an attempt at humor, then it is a poor time to
engage in such a jest.”
“You asked what I remembered. I
told you. I’m not in the habit of making jests with my enemies.”
“Monsieur Palmer, we are not your enemy.
We are not at war.” A long moment passed and then Berger asked, “What year do
you believe it to be?”
“The year of our Lord, 1356.”
“Mon Dieu,” Cloutier said in the
background.
“From what the paramedics told us
you said when they arrived, and your answer today, I am convinced that you do
believe this is 1356. Monsieur Palmer,” Berger covered Stephen’s hand with his
own. “The year is 2013.”
This is book 3 in the series, and this is my first look at this book. I really feel like I was missing a little bit, but still was able to follow along and enjoy the story. What happens when 2 hunky knights are dropped into our time? lol....Chaos and wonder!! The author did a wonderful job portraying first time visitors into our time. I laughed out loud a few times because of the descriptions. The vividness of the writing was very real!!
Was it believable? Could I get into it? Absolutely!! You feel like your journeying right along with the characters!! The romance between Stephen and Esme is a delicious mixture of sweet and spicy.
I would definitely recommend to all my time-traveler and Knight lovers. You won't be disappointed!!
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29 comments:
HI To All,
I want to thank Close Encounters for having me back. I also want to thank Nikki for taking the time to read Knight Blindness and for the lovely review.
I look forward to hearing from her followers. I love to talk books.
Chris Karlsen
Great post and thank you for the chance to win:)
elliott2668[at]yahoo[dot]com
Sounds yummilicious. I want my own knight!
Thanks for introducing me to a new author and for this fun giveaway.
laurathomas61@att.net
Hi Loretta Lynn,
Glad you liked the post. This book took me the longest to write. I wanted to bring both knights forward to show how each handled this modern world in his own way.
Knight Blindness will have a few free download days this month (if you have a Kindle). They're the 21st, the 28th and the 29th.
Chris
Hi Laura,
All three books in this series have knights for heroes. I have a special place in my heart for them too.
Knight Blindness, as I mentioned in another comment, will have three free download days this month for Kindle users. They are the 21st, the 28th, and the 29th.
Chris
Hi. Thanks for the awesome giveaway. I would love to read this book. Sounds very good. Tore923@aol.com
this series sounds awesome! Thanks for sharing and congrats on the new release!
Hi hope you are having a great day.This series sounds great I look forward to diving into it .
Ooh...the excerpt is great! I am looking forward to reading it. I enjoy reading about knights.
Thanks :)
Lori
lorih824 at yahoo dot com
Hi Victoria,
Thank you for visiting with me again. There's three free download days coming up for Knight Blindness if you have a Kindle. They are Sept. 21, 28, & 29.
Chris K
Hi Erin,
Thank you for the kind words. Good luck with the giveaway.
Chris
HI Wanda,
Thank you, I am having a good week. I wish you good luck with the giveaway and hope your week is going well also.
Chris
Hi Beautiful Disaster,
I'm so glad you liked the excerpt. I enjoyed writing this series. I too, have a soft spot for knights.
There will be three free download days for Knight Blindness this month, if you have a Kindle. They are Sept. 21, 28, & 29. If you don't have a Kindle, then the book will be available on the other platforms (Barnes and Noble, Smashwords, iBooks etc after Oct. 21.
Chris
I am excited to read these book sin order. They all sound fascinating.
I also live in the Pacific Northwest and have two rescue dogs.
I forgot my email... sorry...
cahm at aracnet dot com
Hi Christine,
I love hearing you have rescues too. We have 5. Suki is a greyhound from a track rescue. She's elderly now. We got her at 2.5 and she's 10.5 now. We also have a Lab/Golden Retriever mix, Kozi, two black Labs, Sammy & Sascha, and a chihuahua/doxie mix, Trooper. They're our dear babies.
Glad the series intrigues you.
Chris.
This series sounds really cool! I have not read too many books with Knights in them, never really wanted to before, but these books sound really interesting and make me actually want to read about them! I am putting them on my amazon wish list!! I bet my fiance' would love to read them as well!
kbinmichATyahooDOTcom
So much to love about KNIGHT BLINDNESS.
HI Kimberly,
The series gave me the opportunity to weave in different interests of mine. I love England, so I set it there. I love history, especially medieval history, which I got to play with. And, there is a certain built in romance when we think of knights. I'm sure we modern ladies romanticize them far more than justified but that's the charm of fiction:)
If your fiance likes thrillers, I have two books from a different series that are romantic thrillers. Those the romance is the subplot. They're set in Turkey and involve nautical archaeology. They're called: Golden Chariot and Byzantine Gold.
Chris
Hi Mary,
How nice of you to stop and say hi again. I don't know if you read Knight Blindness yet, but it will have three free download days this month. They are Sept, 21, 28 & 29. If you recall the knight Stephen from Journey in Time, then you'll be familiar with this hero. It's that Stephen.
Chris
Hi! Sounds like a great read!!
Thanks for the chance to win!
natasha_donohoo_8 at hotmail dot com
Hi Natasha,
Thank you. Good luck with the contest.
Chris
Hello would love too win. Thanks for the chance.
crystalwarnick83@yahoo.com
Sounds like a great series. Thanks for the giveaway.
pjmillion (at) comcast (dot) net
This sounds like a great series! The excerpt has me wanting to read more...
Thanks for the amazing giveaway!
elizabeth @ bookattict . com
Hi Elizabeth,
Thank you and good luck.
Chris K
Love the sound of this book. Thanks for the giveaway! LadyVampire2u AT gmail DOT com
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